Moving Forward

So, today I got the final copy of my novel. with luck, its re Aaron ready for print.

Segolia Saturday!

"The road you must follow will not e an easy one...Your losses will be much greater than others. You will be defeated, but you cannot give up. Many will need your strength." -Segolia: Daughter of Prophecy

lie vs lay

Standing Alone
I fought so hard
Against their rules and ways
They never let down their guard
I fought for a thousand days
But I tire so very easily, so fast
They are without number
I cannot last
Against those that are not humbler
And I have to ask you now
Do you feel like you can win even still?
Do you feel like you can bow?
Are you feeling like they cannot kill?
Because I’m not now

a challenge for my fellow writers

Prom Pizza

Pizza for
prom
I
didn't even
know
silly I know now
i said yes!

Help My Poem

The Ocean

Some people just dip their feet in one step at a time
Not wanting to get sucked into the depths of the sea
Some dive right in
Thinking they have nothing to fear
But as for me, I stand on the shore
Waiting for the ocean to come to me

It‘s like waiting for a rainstorm
There‘s not really a way to tell
When its coming to you

PLEASE THIS POEM NEEDS HELP

Now that i have your attention. give me feedback on what i can do with this mess of metaphors